If
you could one day
reach
far down
into
the depths of my soul
You’d
see a mind
lost
in the cobwebs of the world,
of
the past
and
the things yet to be
A
heart so scared
that
it walks fearlessly.
An
animal with claws
and a
thorn bleeding its leg
A
cage, self-made for protection
and a
spirit that wants to be free.
If
you could notice one day,
If only
I let you see.
wow, i think this is one of your best aaku... :)
ReplyDeleteand it is the pain tht makes it beautiful, the sorrow that lends light to your words. this is why it is said that a person shouldn't be happy all the time. your words are glorious. :)
yeah..i loved it too. funny how today morning i woke up thinking that haven't seen a new post by you in a long time. anyway..could totally connect to this one...echoes my state too i guess... =) take care.
ReplyDeleteThis was minblowing!
ReplyDeleteThe way your words flow is amazing! :D
Loved it!
priya: I'm still trying to figure out how to react to your comment :P
ReplyDeletebani: haha! You'll be seeing a lot more ab :)
diwita: thank you :)
Thank you all for being so encouraging! There will be a LOT more coming up! Exams bring out the poet/writer/artist/movie fan/bibliophile/music lover in me! Basically anything that doesn't involve reading course related stuff! :P